Precis of my dissertation: A study of Shakespeare’s portrayal of the figure of the writer
My dissertation discussed whether Shakespeare portrayed writers he knew as characters in his plays. Juliet Dusinberre, who edited As You Like It for The Arden Shakespeare, believes that he often created characters who speak with the voice of the author of the work that was Shakespeare’s source for that particular play. Her examples are Friar Laurence in Romeo and Juliet, Jaques in As You Like It and Enobarbus in Antony and Cleopatra. I show however that Shakespeare does not employ such biographical representation. My argument, however, shows what a careful and strategic artist Shakespeare was.
Poet characters in Shakespeare’s plays
First I looked at characters in Shakespeare’s plays who are poets. There are four: Gower, the chorus in Pericles; Cinna the Poet and the Poet in Julius Caesar; and the Poet in Timon of Athens. Gower was a medieval poet whose poem Confessio Amantis was the source for Pericles. Using a poet for the chorus was an out-of-date technique in Shakespeare’s day, and Shakespeare doubled that effect by having his Gower speak in ancient-sounding verse.
In Julius Caesar, there are two poets; the first is Cinna the Poet, who the Roman mob mistake for another Cinna, one of Caesar’s murderers. They tear him apart onstage. The other poet forces his way into Brutus’s tent when he is arguing with Cassius. He offers the two men three lines of terrible verse and is laughed offstage. Shakespeare seems to imply that poets have nothing to do with politics—they either look ridiculous, or worse, are victims of it.
In Timon of Athens, the Poet brings a moral poem to Timon in hope of receiving a reward. Judging by his description, in verse so obscure that it confused even Dr. Johnson, it must be very bad. But curiously, his description of its argument—a warning to Timon against flatterers—sounds suspiciously like Shakespeare’s poem, the play itself. In all three plays Shakespeare compares himself to other poets and implies that he is a superior artist.
Biographical representations of writers
Romeo and Juliet
In Shakespeare’s source, Arthur Brooke’s poem Romeus and Juliet, Brooke condemns the young lovers for their lust in pursuing a secret forbidden love. Though Shakespeare’s Friar Laurence still is a moral voice in the play, he does not condemn the teenagers. But he does help to form our response to them as seeing their love as authentic and earnest.
As You Like It
Neither Jaques nor any character analogous to him appears in the source, Thomas Lodge’ s novella Rosalynde. Because of this and also because his speeches have such depth, he is often supposed to satirize a real person, perhaps Lodge or Jonson. Lodge’s biography—traveller and libertine—is similar to Jaques’s, but their language is nothing similar. Many of Jaques’s speeches do sound Jonsonian, though their biographies have no correlation. In fact, Jaques is most like the common Elizabethan stereotypes of the satirist and the traveller.
Antony and Cleopatra
Enobarbus stems from two persons mentioned in Shakespeare’s source, Plutarch’s Life of Antonius, but a significant number of Enobarbus’s speeches are taken from Plutarch’s exposition. While this might suggest that Enobarbus is a representation of Plutarch, Shakespeare made strategic additions to his lines so that, more than any other character, Enobarbus guides the audience’s reactions to Antony and Cleopatra.
Perhaps more than anything else, by looking at these plays and these characters, it is possible to see that Shakespeare always had a specific strategy in mind for influencing his audience’s reaction, but most of all—and rather mischievously—he instructs us in his own pre-eminence among poets.

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